When our class was presented to do this project I was, again, feeling kind of lost. What was I going to do my project on? That is always one of the hardest parts when it comes to doing all of these project this semester. At first, I thought about doing my project on Greek life as a whole. I later realized that I am not an expert on fraternities and fraternities and sororities have their differences as well. I really liked the idea of doing an audio essay. I already have had a lot of experience with using GarageBand and so I enjoyed editing my recordings. When it came to writing the rough draft of the script, I thought I was going in the right direction. I wrote about why sororities are great and mentioned all of the counter arguments and refuted them. I also touched on why girls should consider going through sorority recruitment. Later I realized that I should have focused more on sororities and their importance to Arizona State University. I found the interviews to be easy as well. The only tough part about the interviews was recording them. The girls that I interviewed were so nervous and we had to re-do the recordings a few times over. When I was writing my first draft I didn’t use an interview using a student that was not involved in Greek life, so for my final draft I used an opinion from a student that was not involved in Greek life. I feel like the use of an outsider really made my argument stronger. The peer-review suggestions that I got said that I needed to focus more on detail and create a stronger argument. I think that I did a good job at stating all the facts and all the “so whats” for my final script and recording. I learned how to stay more on topic. I also learned how to incorporate interviews into my writing. Before, I didn’t know how I was going to put in the interviewees’ responses. After talking to my peers I got more of a feel for how to make my script have a nice flow with my parts and the parts with my interviewees’ responses. Overall, I do feel as though I made a very strong argument by using my interviews as well as many different examples. I think that I can apply this project to the real world as a possible tool for a future career because I really like working with this kind of technology or I can simply record anything that I want to keep and refer back to. I really enjoyed working on this project and it has definitely been my favorite project that we have done in English 101 this semester.
Sunday, December 9, 2012
Sunday, November 25, 2012
Script Draft: "Sororities Beating the Bad Reputation"
For 85 years sororities, as well as fraternities, have been a part of Arizona State University. There are over 3,000 students involved with Greek life on campus. With so many different types of councils and more than 50 chapters, it is hard to find a Greek organization that wouldn’t be a great fit for any student. The Greek council that I am going to focus on is the Panhellenic Council. It is a collection of women’s traditional social sororities and is the governing body of the 12 sororities on campus. I found in the dictionary that the definition of sorority is that it is a society for female students in a university or college, typically for social purposes. Sororities can offer so much more than just the social events. It is definitely true, that the sororities on campus can be seen in a negative light.
There are many myths and stereotypes said about sorority women that keep people from joining these great organizations. Emma Goddery, a student involved in a Panhellenic sorority at Arizona State says, “Sororities have a bad reputation because of the media, the movies, and the one or two girls who have ruined it for the hundreds of others by forgetting that they are not the only ones affected by their actions.” I would have to agree that this is most definitely the reason why sororities have a bad reputation. One myth is that all sorority women look the same. It is movies like, Sydney White, that show women the types of standards and values that sororities look for during recruitment. These values that some people think sororities look for is hair color, pants size, and what kind of brand names girls can bring to the mix. In reality, sorority recruitment is so much more than that. Sororities look for women who have great internal qualities and share the same values as the rest of the women in the sorority.
Another popular myth about sororities is that the women are ‘buying their friends.’ Of course the money that is being paid goes toward benefits for their national chapters. You are also paying for the fun activities and sisterhood events. Sorority women aren’t buying their membership, because they pick you for being you.
A third myth is that sorority girls just want to party and they don’t care about their grades at all. All sororities at Arizona State University have a GPA requirement. In order to rush a sorority, you must have a minimum GPA of a 2.5. Some of the sororities at ASU also require a certain amount of study hours for their new members. Joining a sorority has made me more driven academically because your GPA now affects not only you but every one of your sisters and the chapter as a whole. There are a lot more places for me to get help, a mentor, and a study buddy now.” At Arizona State we also have an organization called Order of Omega. Order of Omega’s purpose is to recognize those Greek men and women that have high achievements academically. Sororities aren’t only useful for your collegiate years, but also useful for when you graduate as well. Taking on leadership positions within the sorority, such as president or vice president, looks very good on a resume. It is useful as a network for finding internship opportunities and job opportunities as well. It makes it easier and less stressful where you go into a field or a new job knowing a sister.
The last myth is that you must get hazed in order to become an initiated member of the sorority. In most states it is a crime to haze. And Arizona is one of those states. Initiated members at Arizona State welcome their new members with open arms. “I think it's sad that the sororities at ASU all have the same stereotype because the girls around me are so amazing and they do not deserve to be thought of in a negative manner especially via the actions of one or two girls that may not even be in the same sorority. Sororities are so much different than outsiders would even consider and it's so hard to explain to someone who isn't involved, so its really sad that outsiders view it in such a negative way.”
A lot of people don’t realize that joining a sorority is an amazing way to feel connected to Arizona State. A lot of the Greek organizations on campus require that their members join another club or organization affiliated with Arizona State. Each sorority and fraternity each have their own philanthropy that anyone in Greek life can participate in. A philanthropy is an event that raises money for a good cause or a charity. Participating in these philanthropies aren’t only fun but they are a great way to help others in need. A lot of people don’t know about all of the great things that these organizations do. “A good way to show all of the positive things about sororities at ASU would be just to put all the good things out there and publicize them. For example, make philanthropies more public instead of being so exclusive to greek, and having people know about all of the things sororities do for others and all the accomplishments of the sisters.” You don’t see the sororities and fraternities on television or in the movies doing charity events.
There is no way that joining a sorority can hinder you academically, professionally, or socially. “My favorite thing about being part of a sorority has been finding girls that have the same sort of values and view on life as me and spending so much time with them because a sorority has really made ASU so much more of a home for me and has really made me happier than I think would have been possible.” Being in a sorority means a lot more to people than what meets the eye. I would highly encourage any girl to at least go through recruitment, it’s a chance that you don’t want to miss out on.
Sunday, November 18, 2012
ASU Reacts: "Let Mitt Be Mitt: But Who Was He?"
Last week our English 101 class was assigned to analyze an NPR story. The one that I chose was called, "'Let Mitt Be Mitt': But Who Was He?" by Ari Shapiro. Shapiro explained what went wrong with Mitt Romney's campaign and why he lost the election. Shapiro's main argument was that Americans want to like their president, and that was the major conflict Romney had to face. Shapiro supports his argument by quoting Mitt Romney at some of his speeches. Shapiro mentions that Romney really lacked at the public speaking portions of his campaign. He would talk about himself mostly, rather than the people of our country. Another potential problem that Romney faced was his religious beliefs and the fact that he is a Mormon. College students at Arizona State University have their own opinions about why the 2012 election played out the way it did.
“I think that the reason that Romney lost the election was because he was a Mormon. He had very extreme views and plans for our country. The public wanted to know more about what he was going to do for America, but he wouldn’t open up on a personal level like Obama did. Because we have more of a middle-class and even lower, we are more of a nation filled with more Democrats than we have Republicans.”
“Obama is an incumbent and he has the advantage of having the White House press. He has more money because of the fact that he had already served one term. Obama had more of a demographic advantage because he supported women’s rights. And we also tend to see that the larger states with more electoral votes are Democratic.”
In a college setting, it is easy to find that there are so many different opinions out there. The Democrats see what Romney did wrong and explained a lot of the same points that Shapiro had mentioned in her story. Whereas the Republicans that I spoke to mentioned the reason’s that Obama already had a somewhat of an unfair advantage over Romney.
Sunday, November 11, 2012
Genre Analysis: "'Let Mitt Be Mitt': But Who Was He?"
I chose an episode from the Morning Edition programs on NPR. The episode was called, "'Let Mitt be Mitt': But Who Was He?" by Ari Shapiro. Shapiro basically talked about what went wrong with Romney's campaign and the Republican Party. The problem that the Republican Party faces today is that they are slowly becoming a minority in comparison to the Democratic Party. Shapiro's main point was that the public wants to like their president, and that was the greatest challenge that Romney had faced.
The language used in this episode was formal. It would be hard for someone who did not know anything about politics to follow what it was all about. This is because of the language used; there was not any given definitions for a lot of the terms used. Shapiro uses his evidence through quotes and interviews. He used direct quotes from when Romney spoke at Le Mars, Iowa. The fact that Shapiro used direct quotes should be able to prove his credibility. I also sometimes have that one thought in the back of my mind that when people use quotes they don't use the whole point of what was trying to be said or proven. I think that the article itself is organized nicely. Each section has its own sub title and all of the writing flows together nicely. He first talks about the issue and what it is in the first section of this episode. Then, he did different sections for every piece of evidence used to back up his main argument. Shapiro didn't really cite information or specific sources. He only used direct quotes from Romney and his speeches and from the public. What makes this article different from any other typical article is that it is in the form of a podcast or radio style. This podcast plays on NPR. The people who listen to NPR are typically interested in current, world events. These people are usually educated on what they are listening to prior to what the episode will teach them about. People who listen to these podcasts also have the ability to take in information and process it without needing the visuals or an article to read. With this specific article/ podcast about Mitt Romney, we have the ability to go online and see the written article as well.
Based on all of this information I found this episode of NPR's Morning Edition to be a simply informative article on the current political situation our country is in. Shapiro shared with the public that Mitt Romney was found to be a great and genuine guy one on one, but when it came to his public speaking he would tend to mess it up with his impressions on the people. Romney became more popular significantly when it came to election day. Shapiro didn't share with us his personal opinion, which doesn't make this an opinion piece. But simply informative on how this years election played out in regards to Mitt Romney.
For Project 3 I was thinking about talking about greek life. There are so many different stereotypes. I would interview people who aren't involved in it and what their take on greek life on campus is. And I would also interview students involved in greek life on campus and what it means to them.
The language used in this episode was formal. It would be hard for someone who did not know anything about politics to follow what it was all about. This is because of the language used; there was not any given definitions for a lot of the terms used. Shapiro uses his evidence through quotes and interviews. He used direct quotes from when Romney spoke at Le Mars, Iowa. The fact that Shapiro used direct quotes should be able to prove his credibility. I also sometimes have that one thought in the back of my mind that when people use quotes they don't use the whole point of what was trying to be said or proven. I think that the article itself is organized nicely. Each section has its own sub title and all of the writing flows together nicely. He first talks about the issue and what it is in the first section of this episode. Then, he did different sections for every piece of evidence used to back up his main argument. Shapiro didn't really cite information or specific sources. He only used direct quotes from Romney and his speeches and from the public. What makes this article different from any other typical article is that it is in the form of a podcast or radio style. This podcast plays on NPR. The people who listen to NPR are typically interested in current, world events. These people are usually educated on what they are listening to prior to what the episode will teach them about. People who listen to these podcasts also have the ability to take in information and process it without needing the visuals or an article to read. With this specific article/ podcast about Mitt Romney, we have the ability to go online and see the written article as well.
Based on all of this information I found this episode of NPR's Morning Edition to be a simply informative article on the current political situation our country is in. Shapiro shared with the public that Mitt Romney was found to be a great and genuine guy one on one, but when it came to his public speaking he would tend to mess it up with his impressions on the people. Romney became more popular significantly when it came to election day. Shapiro didn't share with us his personal opinion, which doesn't make this an opinion piece. But simply informative on how this years election played out in regards to Mitt Romney.
For Project 3 I was thinking about talking about greek life. There are so many different stereotypes. I would interview people who aren't involved in it and what their take on greek life on campus is. And I would also interview students involved in greek life on campus and what it means to them.
Sunday, November 4, 2012
Project 2 Reflection
I was very happy to hear that we were not going to have to write a typical paper for project two, and I think that the rest of the class agreed as well. I am not going to lie, I was very confused about what the actually concept of the project was supposed to be. We had to make some sort of map, and write about places on Arizona State University's campus that went along with each other. A subject that I find interesting is fitness. I could have written about the Student Recreation Center at Arizona State and all of the amenities it has. The SRC has a lot of substance, and different contributions to the subject, fitness. It also seemed like an easy subject to write about and fulfill all of the requirements for this project. I figured that since a vast majority of the class would write about the SRC and that I wrote about it for the last project, so I decided to stay away from the SRC for project two. Something else that I love that is affiliated with Arizona State University is my sorority, Delta Zeta. I was going to talk about the Memorial Union and how Panhellenic recruitment was held there over labor day weekend. I could also write about the SRC fields because that is where philanthropies and intramural games are held. Hayden Library could have also been in my project because my sorority requires us to do study hours there. Of course, I could write about Adelphi, the sorority housing at Arizona State. I almost had everything planned out, but then I remembered that we had to have at least four sources for our project. I did not really think that Hayden Library would have many sources for me to choose form that were about sorority life. I ended up back at square one. It finally dawned on me when I was walking to my Computer Info Systems class. As I was walking to class, I noticed all of the recycle bins placed on campus. I thought about how great it was to have recycle bins on campus. That was when I decided to write about the ways Arizona State University 'goes green.' I easily found resources to use for my project. I found it to be very interesting to investigate ways that Arizona State makes its environment a little bit better. Not being able to fully evaluate each annotation was a struggle for me. I also found it difficult to find direct quotes from my resources that flowed well with my writing. I wish that I could have found more quotes to use. Learning how to use Google maps I think that my project is original and it gives legitimate examples of how Arizona State University 'goes green' every day.
Friday, October 19, 2012
Research Studies: ASU is Going Green
I found it pretty hard to find a topic that would be good for this project. I wanted to do something that would interest me. As I was walking to class I noticed all of the recycle bins that are spread throughout campus. I really like the fact that we have the option to recycle here on campus. I also really like how the recycle bins are right next to the trashcans. The recycle bins are blue and they say "RECYCLE" on them and the trash cans are gray and they say "LANDFILL" on them, and this is what really caught my eye. I decided later that I could do my project on how Arizona State is trying to 'go green.' Of course I would talk about the trash cans and recycle bins around campus, and how we have the option to make our campus a little more environmental friendly.
Another topic that I found interesting recently is the business sustainability major offered at W.P. Carey School of Business here at Arizona State. In my WPC class we have to do presentations on a business major, and last week a couple of my classmates did their presentation on the business sustainability major. It is a pretty new major here on campus and many businesses are looking for sustainability majors so that their companies can keep up with how they can 'go green.' Companies want to make sure that they are looking good to the public eye and they want to show that they care about the environment.
Hassayampa Academic Village is where I live here on Arizona State's campus. When I came here for my visit back in March, our tour guide had mentioned that Hassayampa is the only residence hall that doesn't come with lights in the rooms. Instead of the rooms coming with lights there is a huge window that starts at the ceiling and goes down to the floor. The reason why the window is so large is because natural lighting is encouraged, and we can bring in our own lamps too. Hassayampa was designed to be an energy-conserving and environment friendly place. It is such a big residence hall and if we did have lights in our room people would be tempted to leave them on and waist energy.
Something else that really catches my eye here at ASU is the lawn in front of Barrett the Honors College. When I first moved in here at ASU, I always loved how Barrett keeps their grass so green. But these past couple of weeks the grass has been looking so dead. It was brown, patchy, and dry. Recently, they have been drowning the grass and put caution tape up so that people wouldn't step on the grass and ruin it.
Sources:
McPherson, Hugo, W. Duncan. Wood, and Derek M. Robinson. Emerging Threats to Energy Security and Stability. Dordrecht: Springer, 2005. Print.
El, Mallakh Ragaei, and Carl McGuire. Energy and Development: Proceedings of the International Conference on the Economics of Energy and Development. Boulder, CO: International Research Center for Energy and Economic Development, 1974. Print.
"Reuse/Recycle: The Monthly Newsletter of Resource Recycling." Reuse/Recycle Newsletter 32.9 (2002): 65-72. Print.
Summary:
These sources all talk about the effects of not being responsible about conserving our energy and our natural resources.
Another topic that I found interesting recently is the business sustainability major offered at W.P. Carey School of Business here at Arizona State. In my WPC class we have to do presentations on a business major, and last week a couple of my classmates did their presentation on the business sustainability major. It is a pretty new major here on campus and many businesses are looking for sustainability majors so that their companies can keep up with how they can 'go green.' Companies want to make sure that they are looking good to the public eye and they want to show that they care about the environment.
Hassayampa Academic Village is where I live here on Arizona State's campus. When I came here for my visit back in March, our tour guide had mentioned that Hassayampa is the only residence hall that doesn't come with lights in the rooms. Instead of the rooms coming with lights there is a huge window that starts at the ceiling and goes down to the floor. The reason why the window is so large is because natural lighting is encouraged, and we can bring in our own lamps too. Hassayampa was designed to be an energy-conserving and environment friendly place. It is such a big residence hall and if we did have lights in our room people would be tempted to leave them on and waist energy.
Something else that really catches my eye here at ASU is the lawn in front of Barrett the Honors College. When I first moved in here at ASU, I always loved how Barrett keeps their grass so green. But these past couple of weeks the grass has been looking so dead. It was brown, patchy, and dry. Recently, they have been drowning the grass and put caution tape up so that people wouldn't step on the grass and ruin it.
Sources:
McPherson, Hugo, W. Duncan. Wood, and Derek M. Robinson. Emerging Threats to Energy Security and Stability. Dordrecht: Springer, 2005. Print.
El, Mallakh Ragaei, and Carl McGuire. Energy and Development: Proceedings of the International Conference on the Economics of Energy and Development. Boulder, CO: International Research Center for Energy and Economic Development, 1974. Print.
"Reuse/Recycle: The Monthly Newsletter of Resource Recycling." Reuse/Recycle Newsletter 32.9 (2002): 65-72. Print.
Summary:
These sources all talk about the effects of not being responsible about conserving our energy and our natural resources.
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Wednesday, October 3, 2012
Evaluation
Television has played a huge role in society ever since it has been invented back in 1954. Television was mainly used for news and had about ten channels. The picture was also black and white. Now, in 2012, television sets are found in almost every room in a house, and are watched everyday. Reality television shows are also super popular. It seems like people enjoy watching others suffer or succeed. A show that I have been watching a lot lately is "Here Comes Honey Boo Boo." “Here Comes Honey Boo Boo” is a spin-off from the reality show, “Toddlers in Tiaras.” “Toddlers in Tiaras” is a show about different families and how they put their small children into pretty intense pageants. “Here Comes Honey Boo Boo” is about one of the pageant girls and her family life at home. This girl’s name is Alana. Alana has a big southern family and they live in Georgia. Alana was such a hoot on “Toddlers in Tiaras” that the network, TLC, decided to create a show for Alana and her family.
Alana’s family is something else, and people can’t stop watching them. Alana’s mother is also a major attribute to the television series. She does a really good job at describing what their life is like, making people realize how different they really are from the rest of the country. Another thing that makes this show really popular is that this family is hilarious and honestly, really ridiculous. They are all overweight hicks with improper grammar and a lack of common sense. They do things like go to the “redneck Olympics,” wash their hair in the sink, go to grocery auctions, and buy a pet pig. Alana became especially famous for her famous one-liner, “honey boo boo child.” While being on Toddlers in Tiaras,” Alana would always say this line, and say other ridiculous things as well. Some people say that this television show is a horrible representation of America. And some think that is is hilarious and is very entertaining. I believe in both of these opinions. While this television show does show how stupid some people that live in America are, it is ridiculously funny and I can’t stop watching it. The fact that I can’t stop watching this show and that many others across the country can’t stop watching this show just proves how successful it really is. The reason why television shows exist is because of its viewers. Since “Toddlers in Tiaras” was such a big hit, why wouldn’t “Here Comes Honey Boo Boo” be? It is hilarious and it makes people feel better about their lives. It boosts everyone else’s self esteem, and that is why this show is a success. I love it.
Tuesday, September 25, 2012
Reflection on Writing Process for Project #1
When we were first assigned this project, I thought that it was pretty awesome. Professor Linthicum told us that we had to pick a place and study it. At that moment so many places came to my mind. I thought of Mill Avenue, Old Main, Tempe Marketplace, and many other places. Then I hear that we had to choose a place on the Arizona State campus, and most of my ideas didn't necessarily fit that category. I also found out that our paper had to be at least four pages, then I was stressed. I needed to find a place that had a lot of information to give and also a place that I would find interesting. Coming to Arizona State I always found the busy stairs of Hayden library to be kind of interesting. I have seen people trip and run on those stairs. There is also a bunch of tables around and I figured I could observe those people too. When it came time to do the notes, it was raining! Later that night it had stopped raining, so I went back to Hayden and there was really no one outside. I was panicing a little. As I was walking back to my dorm I saw a lot of people at the SRC fields. The SRC fields would have been my first choice except I thought that a lot of other people would pick the SRC fields too. When I was taking notes on the SRC I realized that there was a lot to it. I felt confident about filling those 4 pages up. I sat down at my computer and started typing. That is how I started my rough draft. Looking back, I should have made an outline and I should have thought of some key points to put in my essay. When I was sitting at my desk typing the paper, I also found it difficult to get the paper to be four pages. I started to talk about pointless things that didn't belong in my paper to try to fill it up, but I only wrote two and a half pages. Another difficulty I found was incorporating a lens yet also putting my own opinions in the paper at the same time. For my final draft I am going to make an outline before writing and I am going to study the readings that we need to use as a reference in our paper so that its easier to use them. I think that my analysis and ideas were good, but just not fully developed. If I just dig deeper into my points, then I think that it can be a great analysis. I think that a way to incorporate this project to the real world is to use analysis while looking for a house or an apartment. I would want to know the ins and outs of a place that I would be planning on living in for a while.
Tuesday, September 18, 2012
Analyzing a Place Worksheet: The SRC Fields
What are the intended functions of the place?
- The intended functions of this place is to give the public a large space where athletes can practice or play their sports, people can exercise, and spectators can watch their favorite game be played.
What overt messages does the place send (i.e., openly communicated through signs)?
- An overt message that this place sends is that it is open to anyone and it can be used for pretty much anything and isn't restricted to just sports.
What covert messages does the place send (i.e., hidden messages)?
- A covert message that this place sends is that it is also a good meeting place because it is kind of in the middle of everything and there are people constantly walking by it. Another covert message is that it is a place where many people grow relationships and bond.
Have previous users left traces behind in the place?
- There is a little dirt track that wraps around the field and people leave there shoe prints on that. People also leave their footprints in the sand of the volleyball courts.
Has the place been re-appropriated (i.e., beyond its original functions)?
- This place has also been used for social events like the freshman luau and other activties like that one.
What social or cultural customs did you observe (i.e., rules governing appropriate behavior)?
- Some social customs that I notices was teamwork, curtesy, and communication. There are also rules that each individual sport has.
Who has access to the place? Are there insiders and outsiders?
- Anyone can have access to this place. For me it seems like the athletes that use the SRC fields pretty much daily are the insiders and the outsiders could be anyone new to the fields.
Who owns the place?
-Arizona State owns the SRC fields I believe.
What is the place’s value (i.e., monetary or otherwise)?
- It doesn't cost anything to use the SRC fields. I find that the people really value this place thought because it is the only open space outdoors for people to use and do something they love.
Are there official representations of the place (i.e., online, in promotional materials)? Do they accurately capture the place as you experienced it?
- There is a sign that says "Sun Devil Recreational Complex." Online they don't really go into depth about the fields besides that there is a running track and that intramural sports are played there.
Is the place in transition, a changing place?
- This place is not in transition.
What conflicts or tensions are there in the place?
- There aren't any conflicts or tensions with the place. The only conflicts that I can think of would be finding a space to play during the evening when it is pretty busy or maybe a conflict with yourself working out or the sport being played.
What is the place’s history? Do you see evidence of the past there in the present?
- This place's history is that is has always been used for recreational activities, but besides that there really isn't any evidence of the past in the present besides the footprints.
How does this place differentiate itself from other places? What other places is it similar to, but how is it different from those places?
- This place is different from other places at ASU because it is the only free space where people can do pretty much whatever they want. It is the only large place where you can do outside sports and activities. Some places that are similar to the SRC fields is the SRC gym, the Wells Fargo arena, and the stadium. The fields are different from these places because you can use it whenever you want.
What questions do you have about your place?
- Is there going to be any improvements or additions that will be added to the SRC fields?
Key Features / Profiles (taken from the Norton Field Guide (Goggin and Bullock) Chapter 16, pages 165-166)
An interesting subject. What is unusual about your place? Alternatively, is there something ordinary about it that you can show in an intriguing way?
- Something unusual about the SRC fields is that there is a small running track that surrounds the fields. Something ordinary about the SRC fields is that people play their sports there, but something intriguing about that is that everyone bonds through the sports that they play.
Any necessary background. What background information will you need to include about the place in order to situate readers?
- Some background information that I would need to tell my readers is just to give the purpose of the fields and a thorough description to give a visual.
An interesting angle. Rather than trying to tell readers everything about the place, what angle(s) might you use?
- An angle that I might use for my readers is writing from a spectator's perspective rather than an athlete's perspective of the place.
A firsthand account. Did you interact with people in the place or participate in some way? What experiences did you have there that you can write about using “I”? (Yes, first person point of view is encouraged, especially for this paper.)
- An experience that I have had at the SRC fields was watching my sorority play in the flag football intramural game against another sorority. I cheered on my sisters.
Engaging details. What specific information must you include in your description of the place? What potential does your place have for the use of sensory images, figurative language, dialogue, anecdotes, and showing rather than telling? What do you want the dominant impression to be?
- Some sensory images that I could include in my paper would be the sounds of the whistles from the refs, trees, sweat, breathing, yelling, spit, water, gatorade, and atmosphere of the evening time. I think that anecdotes and figurative language would also be ideal for my paper.
Generating Ideas and Text (taken from the Norton Field Guide (Goggin and Bullock) Chapter 16, pages 168-169)
Explore what you already know about your subject. Why do you find this place interesting? What did you already know about it?
- What i find interesting about the SRC fields is that it is a place for all different kinds of people to enjoy similar activities. I already know that the SRC fields is a great place to work out and it is available to me whenever I want.
If you’re planning to interview someone, prepare questions. What would you like to ask someone in the place in order to better understand it?
- What is your favorite thing about the SRC fields?
- What kinds of activities do you do at the SRC fields?
- How often do you use the SRC fields?
Do additional research. Does your place have an online component? How else might you gather additional research?
My place has a very brief online component. It talks about the SRC gym mostly. I might to some additional research by joining an intramural sport team..
Analyze your findings. What patterns, images, or recurring ideas or phrases did you use to describe your place? What contrasts or discrepancies do you see?
- Some recurring ideas that keep coming to my mind about the SRC fields is that it brings people together and reminds everyone of a little piece of their home towns.
Come up with an angle. What is most memorable about your subject? What most interests you? What will interest your audience?
- What I find most memorable about the SRC fields is the energy and amount of spirit the people have there. What most interests me is the fact that it makes it easier to get involved. Something that will interest my audience is all the opportunities that the SRC fields give.
Sunday, September 16, 2012
Observation Notes: The SRC Fields
- It is eight o'clock pm and there are two games of intramural flag football going on with four different sororities that were taking up the right side of the SRC fields.
- Delta Zeta has a mascot cheering on their girls, and their mascot is the turtle.
- The two games were Delta Zeta against Gamma Phi Beta and Alpha Phi against Kappa Alpha Theta
- There was a bunch of girls cheering on all their teams, they were singing and clapping in unison. The girls also had signs for their team and they were wearing shirts that represented their sorority and/or had their sorority colors.
- There were also a few guys watching too.
- There are also two sand volleyball courts, but due to the rain, the sand seemed to be a lot darker and thicker than it would normally be.
- Around the two intramural flag football games there were also a few groups of guys just passing a football around and kicking a soccer ball around.
- There are two huge bright lights between the sand volleyball courts.
- I have noticed that there is always something going on at the SRC fields at night time
because it is really hot during the day and during the week there are classes going on during the day. On the weekends, however, there seems to always be people there during the day as well. But there is always the most people there at night time when its cooler.
- I can tell that the recent rainfall has helped the grass with its color, looking much greener and not so much brown as there was when I was at the Luau my first week of being at Arizona State.
- There are also many events that could take place at the SRC fields because of its size and how large it is (i.e. Luau, Slip 'n' Slide).
- On the left side of the SRC fields I saw two different soccer practices going on for the intramural teams that are held by the SRC. They were all male players and they had no uniform on.
- In the right corner by the bike racks, I noticed two girls on a yoga mat. I assume that they were doing partner yoga. It is questionable though. One girl was laying on her back with her feet in the air and the other girl was on top of her feet being held up in the air. Parter yoga? I do not know.
- When I walk to class around 4 I see the Arizona State rugby team getting together for practice. They practice in their uniforms. Their uniforms are maroon jerseys and white short shorts. I have never seen a game of rugby or an actual practice but when I was walking by I just saw them passing around a rather large ball.
- There isn't really any seating at the SRC fields except a couple benches that are usually always taken. Or you could bring your own chairs or sit on the ground.
- Just looking at all of the people on the SRC fields you notice the types of athletic gear everyone is wearing. The volleyball players were wearing shorts and tanks or T-shirts, but no shoes because they were playing in the sand. The soccer players were wearing shin guards and cleats. Some of the football players that were playing in their intramural games had cleats or athletic shoes, and mouth guards.
- I notice that many college students come to the SRC fields to relieve stress, and the intramurals are also a great way to bring people together.
- There is a shorter brick wall that surrounds the SRC fields as a whole. I noticed that many people don't want to take the time to walk around the brick wall to get into the fields, instead of going around people hop over the wall.
- The SRC fields is also a great meeting place because it is where a lot people pass by to get to class or to get back to the dorms.
- Delta Zeta has a mascot cheering on their girls, and their mascot is the turtle.
- The two games were Delta Zeta against Gamma Phi Beta and Alpha Phi against Kappa Alpha Theta
- There was a bunch of girls cheering on all their teams, they were singing and clapping in unison. The girls also had signs for their team and they were wearing shirts that represented their sorority and/or had their sorority colors.
- There were also a few guys watching too.
- There are also two sand volleyball courts, but due to the rain, the sand seemed to be a lot darker and thicker than it would normally be.
- Around the two intramural flag football games there were also a few groups of guys just passing a football around and kicking a soccer ball around.
- There are two huge bright lights between the sand volleyball courts.
- I have noticed that there is always something going on at the SRC fields at night time
because it is really hot during the day and during the week there are classes going on during the day. On the weekends, however, there seems to always be people there during the day as well. But there is always the most people there at night time when its cooler.
- I can tell that the recent rainfall has helped the grass with its color, looking much greener and not so much brown as there was when I was at the Luau my first week of being at Arizona State.
- There are also many events that could take place at the SRC fields because of its size and how large it is (i.e. Luau, Slip 'n' Slide).
- On the left side of the SRC fields I saw two different soccer practices going on for the intramural teams that are held by the SRC. They were all male players and they had no uniform on.
- In the right corner by the bike racks, I noticed two girls on a yoga mat. I assume that they were doing partner yoga. It is questionable though. One girl was laying on her back with her feet in the air and the other girl was on top of her feet being held up in the air. Parter yoga? I do not know.
- When I walk to class around 4 I see the Arizona State rugby team getting together for practice. They practice in their uniforms. Their uniforms are maroon jerseys and white short shorts. I have never seen a game of rugby or an actual practice but when I was walking by I just saw them passing around a rather large ball.
- There isn't really any seating at the SRC fields except a couple benches that are usually always taken. Or you could bring your own chairs or sit on the ground.
- Just looking at all of the people on the SRC fields you notice the types of athletic gear everyone is wearing. The volleyball players were wearing shorts and tanks or T-shirts, but no shoes because they were playing in the sand. The soccer players were wearing shin guards and cleats. Some of the football players that were playing in their intramural games had cleats or athletic shoes, and mouth guards.
- I notice that many college students come to the SRC fields to relieve stress, and the intramurals are also a great way to bring people together.
- There is a shorter brick wall that surrounds the SRC fields as a whole. I noticed that many people don't want to take the time to walk around the brick wall to get into the fields, instead of going around people hop over the wall.
- The SRC fields is also a great meeting place because it is where a lot people pass by to get to class or to get back to the dorms.
Sunday, September 9, 2012
An Analysis of an Image
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Taylor Swift on the cover of Rolling Stone Magazine. Source: BOP and Tiger Beat I decided to analyze this Rolling Stone cover of country star, Taylor Swift. When I think of Taylor Swift, I think of a sweet, sensitive, and innocent girl. That is also probably what most people think of her as well. In this photo, we see Taylor wearing dark make up. Her hair is kind of all over the place. She is also has a serious, straight face. Taylor is wearing a nude top and is holding an acoustic guitar. The acoustic guitar is something that we would normally see Taylor with, but it is the dark makeup, the messy hair, and the serious look to her face that make this cover different. The reason why Taylor looks so serious is because she and Rolling Stone want to show the world that she isn't just an innocent, good girl. She has a dark side and a side that no one knows. If you listen to Taylor Swift's lyrics, you will notice that she has gone through a lot of heartbreak and she has done a lot of self realization. She has probably gone through a lot of tough times in her life, just like anyone else. The cover also says, "Secrets of a Good Girl," which reminds me of that famous saying, "every saint has a past, and every sinner has a future." Taylor Swift is just like anybody else. Everyone has a little dark side to them. Taylor swift probably also wants to be taken a little bit more seriously. Her music mostly appeals to young girls and women, which leads some people to believe that she is just a pop star that isn't too serious and sings about flowers and rainbows. No. She wants to draw in another audience. She wants people who take her lyrics seriously to listen to her music. And those people who would take her lyrics seriously would take her seriously as an artist. I think that the nude shirt resembles a blank canvas in her life. She is always willing to have a fresh start. The acoustic guitar keeps her close to her home roots and close to her country style. |
Sunday, September 2, 2012
Analysis of Writing Situation
In an article from the North County Times newspaper, by Teri Figueroa, I found out about a very strange and sad situation that had happened in my home town, San Marcos, California. Jo Purdy, an 84 year-old woman took her own life and her husband was there by her side the whole time. Her husband, Alan Purdy, was accused of helping his wife commit suicide, and helping someone to commit suicide is considered a felony in the state of California. Alan explained that he never helped her perform the suicide and that he did not touch anything. He was simply there for her through her time of great struggle and suffrage. Jo Purdy had been diagnosed with a chronic autoimmune disease called Sjogren's syndrome. According to Alan, Jo had made up her mind about taking her own life because of how badly she was suffering, and there was absolutely nothing he could do about it. Even Jo's children knew about it and tried to talk her out of it, but there was no getting through to her. Once Jo successfully committed suicide the San Diego Police Department arrived at Alan's front door for questioning. That night he ended up in jail for "helping" his wife commit suicide. August 23rd he found out that there would be no case.
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A great view of San Marcos, California. Source:Wikimedia |
I think that there are multiple purposes for Figueroa to write about Alan Purdy's story. First, I think her main purpose of writing this article is to educate the locals of North County of what is going on in their neighborhood. This would be her ultimate goal because of the fact that she writes for a newspaper, and newspaper articles tend to be about shocking happenings in a local area. Lastly, another purpose for Figueroa to write about the tragedy of the Purdy couple is to shine a light on a controversial issue. Alan Purdy believed that it was his wife's right to take her own life, and because he supported her he was put behind bars. People should always know what is going on in their neighborhood. The writer's purpose is mostly shaped by passion, hopefully. I would think that most journalists enjoy their job. But her purpose could also be shaped by her colleagues or editor. Figueroa's intended audience would most likely be the residents of San Marcos and the cities nearby. Anyone who is interested in California state laws also might want to read this article which would make them an intended audience as well. In order for Figueroa to get all the information necessary to write this article she interviewed Alan Purdy and the Sheriff's department. She used many quotes by Alan Purdy and she explained what was said by both Alan and the Sheriff's department. Figueroa used emphatic paragraphs to make the article easier to follow. She also used an image of the Purdy couple to give the audience an idea of what they look like and what their age was. I was interested in this article because I am from San Marcos. I am absolutely shocked that things like this can happen so close to home. It seems like you hear about stories like this one and they happen in random places. San Marcos also seems so boring to me and nothing serious ever really happens. It kind of freaks me out that Alan Purdy would be able to sit and watch his wife take her own life. I definitely think that he might have some psychological issues which probably began once his wife was diagnosed with what seemed to be such an unbearable disease.
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